Review: Her Billionaire Daddy

Her Billionaire Daddy Her Billionaire Daddy by Allison West
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

Final Score - 3 Stars

This book had such promise ...

The plot line just didn't make sense to me - the entire book desperately needs to combed thru with a fine tuning. The flow was off and I'm sorry, but this didn't feel realistic to me as the reader. The main reason you read a book is to escape and this book has me autocorrecting pages worth of dialogue. that's not an escape, that's becoming an editor.

I liked the relationship between Martin and Samantha, but its lacked creditability in a number of instances.

Please re-edit this book ... and if you need some help, I am available.